From keramida@ceid.upatras.gr Fri Jul 6 11:33:13 2001 Return-Path: Received: from mailsrv.otenet.gr (mailsrv.otenet.gr [195.170.0.5]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C007837B40C for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2001 11:33:12 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from keramida@ceid.upatras.gr) Received: from hades.hell.gr (patr530-a016.otenet.gr [212.205.215.16]) by mailsrv.otenet.gr (8.11.1/8.11.1) with ESMTP id f66IXAh05921 for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2001 21:33:10 +0300 (EEST) Received: (from charon@localhost) by hades.hell.gr (8.11.4/8.11.4) id f66HtEa05240; Fri, 6 Jul 2001 20:55:14 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from charon) Message-Id: <200107061755.f66HtEa05240@hades.hell.gr> Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2001 20:55:14 +0300 (EEST) From: Giorgos Keramidas Reply-To: Giorgos Keramidas To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: various typo and tag fixes in articles/formatting-media X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 28777 >Category: docs >Synopsis: various typo and tag fixes in articles/formatting-media >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: nik >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri Jul 06 11:40:01 PDT 2001 >Closed-Date: Wed Jul 11 17:37:48 PDT 2001 >Last-Modified: Wed Jul 11 17:38:01 PDT 2001 >Originator: Giorgos Keramidas >Release: FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD hades.hell.gr 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #0: Sun Jun 24 18:34:43 EEST 2001 root@hades.hell.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CHARON i386 >Description: The attached patch corrects various typos that I found in articles/formatting-media. It also adds or tags around device names, in some places. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- patch begins here --- Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.16 diff -u -r1.16 article.sgml --- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml 2001/06/04 03:04:38 1.16 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml 2001/07/06 17:51:04 @@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ composed of contiguous sectors. Slices are recorded in a slice table used by the system BIOS to locate bootable partitions. The slice table is usually - called the Partition Table in DOS parlance. Maintained by + called the partition table in DOS parlance. Maintained by the fdisk utility. @@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ - When warned about Writing on installed systems, answer + When warned about writing on installed systems, answer Yes. @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ Enter W when done and confirm to continue. The filesystem will be newfs'd for you, unless - you select otherwise (for news partitions you'll want to + you select otherwise (for new partitions you'll want to do this!). You'll get the error: @@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ Making Dedicated Mode Disks Using the Command Line - Execute the following commands, replacing ad2 with the + Execute the following commands, replacing ad2 with the disk name. @@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ The command line is the easiest way to make dedicated disks, and the worst way to make compatibility disks. The - command-line fdisk utility requires higher math skills and an + command-line fdisk utility requires higher math skills and an in-depth understanding of the slice table, which is more than most people want to deal with. Use sysinstall for compatibility disks, as described below. @@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ The filesystem will be newfs'd for you, unless you - select otherwise (for news partitions you'll want to do + select otherwise (for new partitions you'll want to do this!). You'll get the error: @@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ - Change /dev/ad0b to the device of the newly added + Change /dev/ad0b to the device of the newly added space. @@ -591,13 +591,11 @@ be at least 128 kB, and it should not be not be a power of 2. Now you can mount and use your CCD by referencing device - /dev/ccd0c. - -A more powerful and flexible alternative to CCD is Vinum. See the Vinum Project home page for further -details - + /dev/ccd0c. + A more powerful and flexible alternative to CCD is Vinum. See the + Vinum Project home page + for further details. --- patch ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: dd State-Changed-When: Wed Jul 11 17:37:48 PDT 2001 State-Changed-Why: nik applied this but forgot to close it. Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->nik Responsible-Changed-By: dd Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Jul 11 17:37:48 PDT 2001 Responsible-Changed-Why: JFYI http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=28777 >Unformatted: