From boris@brooknet.com.au Fri Oct 7 15:31:29 2005 Return-Path: Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C47A216A41F for ; Fri, 7 Oct 2005 15:31:29 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from boris@brooknet.com.au) Received: from hlmail1.pacific.net.au (hlmail1.pacific.net.au [61.8.0.69]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2F22B43D45 for ; Fri, 7 Oct 2005 15:31:28 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from boris@brooknet.com.au) Received: from localhost (ppp255E.dyn.pacific.net.au [61.8.37.94]) by hlmail1.pacific.net.au (8.13.4/8.13.4/Debian-3) with ESMTP id j97FVG8w004840 for ; Sat, 8 Oct 2005 01:31:16 +1000 Received: by localhost (Postfix, from userid 1001) id 5AF242283A; Sat, 8 Oct 2005 01:32:12 +1000 (EST) Message-Id: <20051007153212.5AF242283A@localhost> Date: Sat, 8 Oct 2005 01:32:12 +1000 (EST) From: Sam Lawrance Reply-To: Sam Lawrance To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: New article: Maintaing and contributing to the FreeBSD Ports Collection X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: erwin@freebsd.org >Number: 87073 >Category: docs >Synopsis: New article: Maintaining and contributing to the FreeBSD Ports Collection >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: medium >Responsible: linimon >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: change-request >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri Oct 07 15:40:09 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: Mon Oct 17 11:54:49 GMT 2005 >Last-Modified: Mon Oct 17 11:54:49 GMT 2005 >Originator: Sam Lawrance >Release: FreeBSD 6.0-BETA5 i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD dirk.no.domain 6.0-BETA5 FreeBSD 6.0-BETA5 #0: Sun Oct 2 17:26:52 UTC 2005 root@dirk.no.domain:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: I have a draft titled as per synopsis, and am looking for a doco person to help me get the SGML up to scratch so I can finally finish the bloody thing. Viewable here (plus some extra manually added highlighting): http://people.freebsd.org/~lawrance/contributing-ports/article.html And a shar of the source is here: http://people.freebsd.org/~lawrance/contributing-ports/contributing-ports.sh >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: From: garys@opusnet.com (Gary W. Swearingen) To: Sam Lawrance Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/87073: New article: Maintaing and contributing to the FreeBSD Ports Collection Date: Fri, 07 Oct 2005 09:12:17 -0700 I don't like how many articles have their abstract closely following the trademark notices with just a blank line between. One possible fix is to insert this just after the start tag: Abstract I haven't seen what this looks like yet. Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->linimon` Responsible-Changed-By: linimon Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Oct 7 18:04:33 GMT 2005 Responsible-Changed-Why: I'll take it. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=87073 Responsible-Changed-From-To: linimon`->linimon Responsible-Changed-By: linimon Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Oct 7 18:56:22 GMT 2005 Responsible-Changed-Why: Some days it doesn't pay to crawl out of bed. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=87073 From: Sam Lawrance To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/87073: New article: Maintaing and contributing to the FreeBSD Ports Collection Date: Mon, 10 Oct 2005 01:35:07 +1000 I have updated the shar and html preview. Changes: - wrap, indent and format according to FDP primer - included a number of small rewording suggestions from eivind http://people.freebsd.org/~lawrance/contributing-ports/article.html http://people.freebsd.org/~lawrance/contributing-ports/contributing-ports.sh State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: linimon State-Changed-When: Mon Oct 17 11:54:34 GMT 2005 State-Changed-Why: Committed, thanks. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=87073 >Unformatted: